Analyse the air pollution problem in Hong Kong
“Hong Kong air is too bad that I can not breath anymore “said by a visitor. Nowadays, the pollution problems in Hong Kong become a serous problem, especially air pollution. Pollution means the undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities. Air pollution problem in Hong Kong mainly come from exhaust gas of car, industries, pollute from power station and the pollute come from China. As the problem becomes worse, so I would like to talk about this problem by give out some harmful effect of air pollution to the environment and human life. Besides that, I will give out some suggestions to solve the air pollution problem in Hong Kong.
My first point will start with the environmental effect caused by air pollution.
My first point will start with the environmental effect caused by air pollution.
posted by Andy at
12:11 AM
1 Comments:
Title ok.
However, if you are going to give suggestions to solve this problem, then the title should also include this.
Some grammar problems:
'pollute from power station and the pollute come from China'
should be
'pollution from power stations and the pollution that comes from China'
'give out some harmful '
should be
'writing about some of the harmful'
'discuss some suggestions..'
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Adam, at 5:21 AM
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