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Thursday, November 09, 2006

Suicide problem

In China, there were more than 250000 suicides per year and around 2.5 to 3.5 million people have attempted suicide. Suicide is the fifth largest cause of death all over the world. The government should more concern about this problem. There are many reasons that people committed suicide.For young people they may do this because of the less of life experience. When they come across a problem, they have no way to solve it, and then they may try to escape from the problem by other way, for example, drugs abuse or committed suicide.Also, young people are needed to have competition with adult after graduate; they may under a high pressure. They will feel depression and try to end their life by committing suicide.TO prevent the suicide problem become worse, government should more concern about the young people needs and provide more job opportunity for young people. Also government should set up a national, around the clock and fee hotline for the people to call when they want to commit suicide. This can prevent suicide of people especial young people.

1 Comments:

  • Your paragraphing needs work.

    One pargraph should be on the causes, anopther one on possible solutions.

    There are also some grammar errors.

    "should be more concerned"

    "young people have more competition.."

    "They will feel depressed"

    By Blogger Adam, at 6:55 PM  

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